January 10th, 2006

What's a personal bubble? - BOYS

[REPOST] Fic: (PB) Disassociation

Is it wrong that I want to go through pb_plotbunnies and tag all the entires? So sad.

LJ fic. Gen. It feels clunky and wrong. I'm not sure if this is gonna be the final version or not. It started out one way and ended up another so I'm not sure how good it is. In fact? The more I think about it the more I dislike it, mainly I'm posting this for C&C. See something you don't like? A specific part that doesn't feel particularly "right" or like it fits? Tell me. Please. I want this to feel less crappy.

Title: Disassociation
Status: In Progress
Rating: G
Fandom(s): Prison Break
Characters: LJ, Veronica, Lisa
Pairing: None.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Prompt: #95 Grieve.
Summary: Deep breaths.

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